Readers Review focus

Okay, so for the reader's review it would be great if I could get feedback on the essay as a whole. There are some specific areas where I want feedback, but I really want to know how my essay is in general. The two areas I would really like a focus on is the analysis of my blog and my relation to West's article. With my analysis I want to know how strong you think it is, and whether you feel I need to go further in-depth or more analysis overall. Then, with my relation to West's article I want to know if it's strong, how it sounds, and if you think that it is sufficient or I need more.